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"Oh, Raven! It is so wonderful you could join us!" Starfire exclaimed as Raven walked outside. She was lying on the ground next to Robin. "Robin was just showing me how to make the angels of snow!" She laughed as Robin sprinkled snow on her face. "It is most fun! Would you like to make an angel of snow?"
"No thanks. I barely want to do this snowball fight. I'm ready to walk inside right now." 'A book and some herbal tea by the fire sounds nice,' she thought.
Cyborg walked over to Raven's side. He put his hand on her shoulder. "Why not just sit and watch?" He smiled.
Before she could reply, a voice behind them said, "She's not backing out of this fight."
They all turned to see Beast Boy in the door. He didn't look angry, as Raven thought he would. But he did look tense. 'I wonder how much that fight affected him,' Raven thought.
She wasn't the only one who noticed his bad mood vibes. Cyborg seemed to, too. "Chillax, BB. You know Raven. Let her sit out for awhile."
"No," Raven spoke up. "I want to get this over with as quickly as possible."
"Well, let's get started!" Beast Boy shouted. He pushed past Raven and hid behind one of the snow covered rocks.
Starfire jumped off the ground, dragging Robin with her. "Let us hide like Beast Boy!" she said to him and took off running. Robin looked at Raven and Cyborg, shrugged, and ran after her.
Cyborg looked at Raven. "You really don't have to do this. Don't take crap from him. He's been in a bad mood lately."
Raven didn't look at him. 'Lately? So this isn't the first time? Or maybe it was about what he said.' His words rang in his ears. 'Why do you always have to be so mature? Stop being so mysterious and distant. We're all fed up with your shit! You're a kid! Act your age for once!' She wanted to tell Cyborg about their fight. He was like a big brother to her. He'd even call her "lil' sis" a few times. But she never told him about her fights with Beast Boy before. This one wasn't any different, even though it felt different. Instead she said, "Nah. The main reason I agreed to this was to chuck snowballs at Beast Boy's head." An immediate image of Beast Boy being attacked by snowballs filled Raven's head.
Cyborg laughed. "Now you're in the spirit. Here's a little tip. Be on your guard at all times. You never know when a snowball's gonna be chucked at you." He winked and ran off, leaving giant footprints in the snow.
Raven was finally alone. She wished it would stay that way. But she had to be on her guard at all times, just like Cyborg said. She put up a shield just in time to see a snowball bounce off of it. She looked around to see the source of the snowball, and found a pink fluffy hat poking above a rock. Its owner giggled.
The Azarithian bent down, feeling protected by her dome-like shield, and scooped up some snow and molded it into a snowball. As she straightened up, Starfire jumped up from the rock and threw a snowball at Raven's shield. Knowing this was her chance, she quickly took down her protection and threw the snowball at her pink-hatted friend. It hit her in the chest making Starfire giggle more.
Robin popped up from behind a rock next to Starfire's ('Is it possible for them to be apart?' Raven thought.) and threw a small snowball at Raven. Not having much time to put up another shield, she dodged it, and almost ran into another snowball.
'Who's the culprit now?' she thought. She put up her dome-like shield, just in case and looked around for the person behind this snowball. She finally saw Cyborg who was out in the open, not giving a care as it seemed. He winked at her and she laughed.
She scooped up some more snow and formed a snowball to throw at Cyborg. She heard a snowball bounce off her shield but ignored it. She took down her fort long enough to throw the snowball and quickly put it back up. Another snowball hit her shield, this one from Robin. She was being ambushed. Why weren't they attacking each other? She felt singled out.
"No fair! You can't use your powers!" Beast Boy cried from behind her. He came running to them to join the ambush.
"Give her a break man!" Cyborg yelled. "At least she's in the fight, even though she didn't want to." Raven smiled. She could always count on Cyborg to back her up.
"Well, no one else is using any of their powers!" the green-skinned teen shot back.
Raven looked around at all her friends. He was right. She was the only one using advantages. Everyone else was playing fair. She took down her shield reluctantly.
"You don't have to give into him, Rae. You're already in the fight," Cyborg said.
"It's fine. If it shuts him up, then I'll gladly do it." She took off running towards the edge of the island on which their tower was built. What else was she supposed to do? Stand there and get pelted by snowballs? She looked back to see if anyone had followed. Only Beast Boy. Raven sighed. What was up with him? Cyborg's words came back to her. "He's been in a bad mood lately." That means it wasn't her fault if he was in a bad mood before the fight. Was it? She shook the thought from her head and kept running.
She reached the very edge of the island and scooped up some snow and molded it into a sloppily made snowball. She turned around to throw it but a snowball hit her in the face. Then everything was a blur. She dropped her snowball in surprise and lost balance. The Azarithian fell backwards and hit her head on a rock, knocking her out cold. Raven tumbled into the water.
"Raven!" Beast Boy screamed. He ran to catch her but was too late. She had already fallen in. He had to save her. There wasn't any time to warn the others. He quickly transformed into a dolphin and jumped in.
Cyborg, Starfire, and Robin came running down the hill. "What happened?" Starfire asked nervously. They both shrugged.
'It's cold in here!' Beast Boy thought. It felt like it was made of ice instead of water. Plus, it was really dark except for the few rays of sun shining at the surface. He kept swimming though, frantically looking for his unconscious friend. Not having any luck, he used sonar. He tried many times and locations, but to no avail. Finally he found her. He swam to her body as fast as his fins would let him. He reached his friend and making sure she was firmly on his back, carried her out of the water.
The changeling arrived at the surface to see the rest of his friends on the shore. He flopped Raven on the beach and transformed into a dog to shake the water off.
"Hey! Watch where you're splashing!" Cyborg yelled. He picked up Raven in his metal arms. "We need to get her to the infirmary."
"What happened?" Starfire asked worriedly, only to be ignored.
"There's no time," Beast Boy said. "Put her down."
Cyborg hesitated. "B, I really think-"
"Just put her down!" he demanded. "If she dies, I won't be able to live with myself because this is all my fault!"
"Okay, okay." Cyborg put her down and backed away. "Just don't do anymore damage."
Beast Boy ignored him. He looked at Raven's white face. It blended in with the ground. Her hair was now a dark purple instead of its light violet. It contrasted with her snow white skin. It clung to her pale face. She wasn't breathing. Maybe she was dead. Maybe trying to save her was useless. 'No! Don't think like that!' Beast Boy thought. He unwrapped her scarf which was clinging tightly to her neck. He bent down to perform CPR but hesitated. 'Raven would kill me if she knew I was doing this. But if I don't, she won't live to kill me.' He bent the rest of the way and began performing CPR. He came back up and pushed on her chest. "C'mon, Raven! Live!" he whispered. He breathed into her again, making her chest rise and fall. Was it working? He pressed on her chest three more times.
Losing hope, he was ready to give up. He kept pressing on her chest anyway. 'Don't leave us, Raven. Don't leave me,' Beast Boy thought. 'One more breath,' he decided. He bent down one last time and blew as much air into her as his lungs would allow. Nothing. Warm tears thawed his face. Hopefully he was still wet. He could blame it on that. But hell, if Raven died, did it really matter if he looked tough? Would anyone care if he started bawling?
The body underneath him started to cough. He looked down to see his drenched friend gasping for air. Her eyes fluttered open staring up at him. He breathed a sigh of relief and heard three more behind him.
Raven's hand flew up to her forehead. "My head," she complained. "I have a major headache." She sat up clutching her head. "What happened?"
"I'll explain later," Cyborg said. He picked her up off the ground. "Right now, we need to make sure you're okay." He started to walk towards the tower.
"I would argue, but my head's throbbing and breathing's painful," she said quietly. She closed her eyes and started coughing. "Ow."
First, they arrived at Raven's room. "I think you should change into something  warm and dry," Cyborg suggested. Raven nodded as Cyborg put her down and went inside her room. Cyborg stayed outside and leaned on the wall.
Inside Raven's room, she quickly disposed off her drenched apparel and walked over to her closet in search of something more comfortable. She took out some gray sweatpants and a navy blue tank top (A/N: Really, Rae? In this weather?) and combed her soaked hair. She walked outside to find Cyborg playing solitaire on his arm (A/N: Wouldn't that be cool? ^.^)
They walked to the infirmary and Raven laid down on one of the beds. After making sure she was comfortable, he headed over to the machinery. "We need to check you out for hypothermia or if there's too much water in your lungs. We don't need to risk you dying from dry drowning. Also, we need to check for a concussion," he said. He picked up some wires lying on the table and walked over to Raven. "I'm just going to hook you up with these wires and start testing," he told her, almost as if asking it was alright. Raven merely nodded.
Cyborg started to attach the wires to various parts of her body. Arms, legs, chest, back, etc. Raven turned to face him. "Do you think we're in here too much?"
The half-robotic teen laughed. "We're super heroes. What do you expect? That we're invincible? We're not that good." He shook his head. "If only we were, though."
"Am I in here because I'm a super hero?" she asked fiercely. When her friend didn't answer she said, "Am I?"
Cyborg looked at her face, which was covered in patches connected to wires. She looked quite funny actually. But if he ever said that, he'd be the one worrying about a concussion. Her eyes dared him to say yes. He slowly shook his head.
"No. I'm not. I'm in here because of him!" she yelled. She didn't want to say Beast Boy's name, but Cyborg still knew who she was talking about.
"Rae, it was an accident. He didn't mean to do that," he said calmly. He walked back over to the monitor. "You should've seen him when you were unconscious. He was going berserk." He smiled.
Raven was unfazed. "He felt guilty."
Cyborg turned around. "Why was BB seriously tense earlier, before the fight? He hasn't been that bad all week. He was fine before he left to get you," he said accusingly, changing the subject.
The empathy froze. 'He knows,' she thought. She turned her head the other way and stayed silent.
"So you know something," he said. His expression softened. "You can tell me."
She shook her head. "It's no big deal," she said unconvincingly. "Just another one of our daily arguments."
Cyborg rolled his human eye and crossed his arms. "I know better lil' sis," he said, using his nickname for her. "BB wasn't the only one in a bad mood."
"I don't want to talk about it," she said softly. She didn't even want to think about it. She closed her eyes and wiped all thoughts from her mind and let the humming of the machines lull her to sleep.
Chapter 2 is finally finished. I'm working on chapter 3. . .sorta. I don't really have ideas except for the 1st part. And it's not even that great of an idea. If anyone has any ideas or requests for the next chapter (or any part of the story for that matter), do not hesitate to tell me. I don't care how you tell me either. Just let me know you're actually interested in my story.

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Song that inspired me to write this series:

I Hate Everything About You by Three Days Grace
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raexxbb123 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Student Photographer
is there a third chapter
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XmagicgirlX Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Student General Artist
awesome story when u posting the third chapter?
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redraven432 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011
Love it! :D Hope to see more.
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Chicky-the-Dragon Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Loving the plot so far :)
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bricktherouge Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Student General Artist
NNNEEEEEDDD CHAPTER 3!!!!! :iconiloveitplz: keep the chapters coming!! this is adorable and adventure filled! XD i desperately want to read more!!!! XD
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RaeandBB2000 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010   Writer
Thanks. Chap 3 should come soon. I have major writer's block for this story. :writersblock:
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bricktherouge Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Student General Artist
thats ok. ^^ i have animation block right now!! :D but its going away a bit. ^^ i just needed to animate something i guess. lol. maybe my fire for animation just went out and i had a brain fart. :P
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AnhPho Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really like whre this is going!
Interesting story.
Keep posting;)
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RaeandBB2000 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010   Writer
Thanks. And will do. ^^
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tinkometer Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I LOVE IT!!! :iconiloveitplz:

MuSt WaTcH! :D
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RaeandBB2000 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010   Writer
I'm glad you like it. :D Chap. 3 should be coming soon. I just need to sort out all my other fanfics. I've been avoiding that for 2 or 3 months now. =_=
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tinkometer Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YAY! cant wait! :D
my friend has the same thing, she starts a fanfic, gets through a few chapters, then moves onto another one until she has about twenty 'in progress' fanfics!
(thanks so much for the fav! :D)
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total012dramafan Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010
I RESENT THAT! well.....maybe i do have a problem.......OK I NEED HELP YOU KNOW I DO! (If you didn't know, i'm the friend :P)

Awesome fanfic! I like it so far. I'm interested in seeing what happens next. :D
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tinkometer Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
its okay katie, i understand :psychotic:

(i agree 100%!!! :D)
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total012dramafan Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010
I know you know! XD
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tinkometer Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i know u know i know :slow:
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total012dramafan Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010
don't make me add on to that! TOO MANY CONFUSING WORDS! Also, want to know whats cool? I GOT WHIP IT ON DVD!
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RaeandBB2000 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010   Writer
No prob.

And I completely understand your friend's situation. I wrote a fanfic last year, got up to 9 chaps, then moved onto another one. It is still waiting to be continued and I think people are coming after me with pitchforks soon. :fear: So thanks for understanding! :hug:
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total012dramafan Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010
(I'm the person tinkometer mentioned again :)) The only problem is when your a writer, you get soooo many new ideas! and it's like little midgets kicking your head and whispering in your ears to write it! it's torture (literally).........i think i need some serious help! haha! It really is a pain. I really get it. But it's a burden about being a writer. It's almost like your own mind is like peer pressureing you to write a new one!
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RaeandBB2000 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010   Writer
Lol. Yeah. It's like, I start one story and then those "midgets" say, "Oh look! Another idea! Start writing this one! Do it now! Do it now!" And I have no choice but to give in. And you're fine. I can be very annoying, too. And I'll try my best to finish the story. Thanks for understanding.
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tinkometer Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yea, me and another friend are her trusty editors so we're always on her back about that stuff! (she even had a contest to see who could throw the randomest thing at her if she ever quit her most popular fanfic! it was a banana with george bush sticker on it :D)
no problem! :hug:
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total012dramafan Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010
Watch me finish it! i gotta get you and Sarah off my back! I'm also afraid of G.B. sooooo i will cross the finish line (eventually) XD
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tinkometer Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
if not: ill just drag you by your ankles :D
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total012dramafan Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010
well then, you better get back on the crutches! Because you have to be pretty buff to drag ME across the ground!
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RaeandBB2000 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010   Writer
Hmmmm. Maybe I should do something like that. And yeah, I have some trusty editors, too. They're always the first to see my work, give me ideas, and sometimes slap me if I haven't finished a story. o_o
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total012dramafan Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010
It's annoying because you know their right, but the little devils STILL whisper in your ears! haha I should really stop commenting on every comment you guys make! I'm just going to stop being annoying now ^^;

Great story! Hope you finish it. But those midgets will STILL keep hounding us. So if you don't, i'll understand :)
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RaeandBB2000 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010   Writer
I thought you should see this. [link]

It applies to me so much. ^^;
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tinkometer Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
editors rule! :D
yup, practicly our job in a nutshell.
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Oscelot8046 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010
great story so far. I would give you my ideas but i would like to know where you are going with the story before i do. I just want to know if like you want them to get together or not and stuff like that. When you get a chance to tell me i'll pick out some of my better ideas and give em to ya. TTTYL
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RaeandBB2000 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010   Writer
Well, first things first, they don't get together until the very end. That's all I can tell you w/o giving anything major away. If you need more info, just tell me. Thanks! I really apprieciate it! ;)
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Oscelot8046 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010
well thats enough for me. One thing you might do is have raven pick up on little hints. That's almost a no brainer. But make the hints that she picks up on totally abstract. Like instead of the nomal things that girls pick up on like them being nervous, or them staring at them, make it stuff like him always looking at her but almost angrily. And then him beating himself (Literally) for saying something stupid. But make her not understand it until the very end. That's one of my ideas for that. I'll give you more when i think of it.
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RaeandBB2000 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010   Writer
Tempting. Very tempting. But do you have any specific requests or ideas for the next chap?
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Oscelot8046 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010
no specifics. I'm thinking about writing a story like that of my own, but i dont have any thoughts to make it cool. So no, i dont have any requests. One idea for the next chapter is to maybe have raven be so restless after getting out of the infirmary that she goes and gets some tea. Then when she gets out she see's BB eating tofu. she's about to scream at him when she noticed he's crying and that he leaves the building. I dont know, have him do some stuff in the snow outside and then have him talking to himself. Have him maybe scorn himself for hurting her and at first she agree's with him for being stupid. but as he goes on and on she starts to wonder why he takes it so hard. That's just one idea that you dont have to use. anyways cant wait for the next chapter. MUST...HAVE...MOOOOORE. oh sorry. lol. TTYL
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RaeandBB2000 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010   Writer
Great idea. I'll try to fit it in (cuz I do have an idea for the beginning and no I will not tell you what it is ;))
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Oscelot8046 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2010
That's ok. I like to be surprised. Cant wait to read more.
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Grrssness Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2010
^.^ das coolz
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RaeandBB2000 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2010   Writer
Have you read the 1st one? It doesn't really matter all too much but it's less confusing if you do.
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Grrssness Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010
Confuzzled. Me dunnoes.
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RaeandBB2000 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010   Writer
You're always confuzzled
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Grrssness Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2010
huh? ^.^
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RaeandBB2000 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2010   Writer
My point exactly
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Grrssness Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2010
i is confuzzled now .... :confused: wait.. rnt u sposed 2 b studying?? *eyes suspiciously* >.> hmmmmmmnnnnn... waffle! i couldnt get the preveiw rt so i put the deviation on the scrapbook. rahh. :(
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RaeandBB2000 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2010   Writer
Ah. And nooooooooo >.>

Amazingful!
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Grrssness Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010
Confuzzled. Me dunnoes.
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